on STAN by poetry_rancour
13 Mar 2007, 10:04 AM
talent...fun to read...:) Bethy
on The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani
12 Feb 2007, 9:58 AM
A true story? WOW! I think we all have gone to school with an "Andy" Sad but a good poem/story.
:) Bethy
:) Bethy
on some deleted poem
12 Feb 2007, 7:17 AM
Wow! This is a fav...I love it when my mind goes on a brief vacation, when my eyes are closed :) Bethy
on In the assessment of zero by Prince of Void
3 Mar 2007, 3:36 AM
Sir, your poem in comments is better...however the one posted is good too...I thought of war and dying...helplessness and pain...sad thoughts but that is what popped into my mind... :) Bethy
on Quantum Reality by Quarton
3 Mar 2007, 3:44 AM
I read this twice...pause...three times...dito on science and speculation(Dovina)...second last para is my fav part...:) Bethy
on The Beginning by jessicazee
3 Mar 2007, 3:52 AM
I don't know why but I get it...I've been wearing a single shoe for 7 years...lol :) Bethy
on Taste of Ash (A long project barely beginning) by sliver
3 Mar 2007, 3:28 AM
Is this about life...longevity...spontanious combustion...without an inner fire, one could fizzel out...??? This is what I got from your lyrics...am I anywhere close? I'll vote later... :) Bethy
on The Laws of Life by lrustagi
3 Mar 2007, 4:06 AM
very good, I like this form of language...It appeals to one of my other lives...:) :) Bethy
on some deleted poem
3 Mar 2007, 4:10 AM
poo poo head...I hate it that your talent is so natural and raw!!! Have a sunny day :) Bethy
on A Single Strand of Golden Yellow by Aetius
3 Mar 2007, 4:13 AM
I love this kind of "other verse" I write alot of it...I will post my sweater poem soon as well...it was written many moons ago...:) Bethy
on Shoe Thief by Blue Magpie
3 Mar 2007, 4:28 AM
A poetic story of canine reality...fun to read, my son loved it! he gives you a 9 and I gave you a 7, so...we compromised with an 8 :) Bethy
on looking for by Phalkon
3 Mar 2007, 4:39 AM
Writers block, It's easier if you try to eat Cherrio's with a fork. :) Bethy
on A Rendezvous by lrustagi
9 Mar 2007, 1:18 PM
I like this !! Don't change a word... :) Bethy
on A Question by poetry_rancour
13 Mar 2007, 10:05 AM
hehehe lol...and it should be...:) Bethy
on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2007, 10:06 AM
radio ga ga...old song from many moons ago...still its good :) Bethy
on Pedaling West by Dovina
13 Mar 2007, 9:50 AM
May God grant you with "Buns of Steel" my dear friend...good poem :) Bethy
on Just today by MacFrantic
13 Mar 2007, 9:56 AM
I like this...judgement comes to those who know how the story ends...:) Bethy
on some deleted poem
13 Mar 2007, 10:02 AM
Interesting...I like the link between music and making the 10th shot, all by chance and Larry is watching...lol... he just won't turn the music back on til you move on...go ahead...make the basket...the ball is in your court... good poem :) Bethy