on Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher
5 Aug 2005, 6:54 AM
I love this...so imaginative and creative...I think I peeeeeed myself... Bethy :)
on The Edge is Better Blue by D. $ Fontera
5 Aug 2005, 6:50 AM
there is a fine line between love and hate...hmmm...life is a prism of color...ironically the edges of a prism are all blue...this is what I saw in your Cinquain...good job... Bethy :)
on THINK ABOUT ME by prettyktm
4 Aug 2005, 2:47 PM
Is this a dream-state, a lonesome trick of the mind, sounds like the separation of two loves searching for a reason to be togeather...
good poem...Bethy :)
good poem...Bethy :)
replying on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy
4 Aug 2005, 2:42 PM
Thank you toward...yes abstract...its like eating a peanut butter sandwich without tastebuds...lol...its like seeing something, and not saying it outloud...so your eyes are speaking in your mind... Bethy :)
on Disregard the first line of this poem by T. Jonathron Remp
4 Aug 2005, 1:47 PM
WOW!!! excellent ! Now you got me thinking... Ok...there is no beginning and there is no end :)
replying on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy
4 Aug 2005, 1:42 PM
Thank you Penny... and yes life can be very FULL at times... Bethy :)
on Never born. by | Broken |
4 Aug 2005, 12:08 PM
very deep...
Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do...
Good poem
Life is not too short...its the longest thing we have to do...
Good poem
on Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222
4 Aug 2005, 12:01 PM
good one :)
on untitled by AaronJKeating
3 Aug 2005, 3:43 PM
YES!!!
on On the Discovery of Hats and a Jaunting Ogre by MacFrantic
3 Aug 2005, 3:38 PM
I think limerick,s are funny and yours are fun...wtg :)
on No More Tomorrows by PoeticOne
3 Aug 2005, 3:28 PM
This is good...hmmmm sadness,hurt,pain,lost love...yup...all the right ingredients to make me feel this poem... :)
on Drops of Pain by PoeticOne
3 Aug 2005, 3:24 PM
The only thing I have to offer for a comment is...I have chocolate..and am willing to share... :)
on Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp
3 Aug 2005, 3:16 PM
Mr.T Your potato with words is exactly potato...potato rhythm, truely potato unique...Bravo! :)
replying on Vain Moment by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 3:09 PM
Yes I did enjoy this one, I wrote it in about 5 minutes...I woke one morning sitting upside down I believe...hehaha! Thank you
replying on Vain Moment by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 3:07 PM
mornin Mr.T hehehaha!
replying on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 3:03 PM
Thankyou for your great comments :)
replying on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 3:01 PM
Why thankyou Mr.T
on Interstellar Planetary Escape Plan by drnick
3 Aug 2005, 10:46 AM
Sounds like an escape from the reality of Divorce...been there... Bethy
Excellent!! Bethy