on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 1:48 PM
I like the flow of it, great wording too! Good Job!
on Potato hail by T. Jonathron Remp
3 Aug 2005, 1:50 PM
It was ok... but its different, as in unique!
on Vain Moment by Bethy
3 Aug 2005, 1:52 PM
I like the style you put into it, it seemed you enjoyed this one! Good job!
on You can never go back! by pennymarie
4 Aug 2005, 7:28 AM
I really like this a lot! Your style and wording are great! Keep it up!