on The Surfer's Prayer by flock
21 Sep 2006, 1:29 AM
everthing and then some. well said. keep riding them waves of life with vigor and with dreams. to god be all the glory. x
on I Have, Because I Am by flock
21 Sep 2006, 1:52 AM
It starts off in an intimate detail of moments that the poet holds dear, then builds up into a climax of successive emotions and expressions of life. On Dovina's comment, yes we do all experience most of those things but isn't that what we've been given to experience? And by reading someone else's experiences and knowning these feelings and things for ourselves, does this not make us relate to the poem so much more?Isn't this what life is all about? To experience life by ourselves and with others? To be?
So Flock, you were, you are and you will be because you have. Awesome poem.
Continue living life to the fullest for it's been given with the greatest love. x
So Flock, you were, you are and you will be because you have. Awesome poem.
Continue living life to the fullest for it's been given with the greatest love. x