on Bleeding in the American South by wilco
14 Sep 2007, 3:10 PM
you have a well crafted western. doesn't really say anything new and i don't like the refrain, but still well done
on new clothes, same old story by nypoet22
28 Apr 2007, 2:18 PM
'fraid you inspired me to write a poem on the emperor, thanks!
on Puppet & Conversation by Blindpoetry
26 Apr 2007, 6:51 AM
well this was fun. i was worried at first because your first stanza is rather patronizing and doesn't say much i didn't know already, but the second stanza really got it going... from then on you gave us bright, fresh and disturbing images, me liked...