on Drug Dealer by Bazilla
22 Oct 2007, 1:09 AM
You should change the title to Day Tripper...I think you would sell a few records that way.
on Car Crashes by poemwanker
22 Oct 2007, 12:42 AM
I like where you're going with this poem. Just a few minor adjustments and this would be good.
on On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove
22 Oct 2007, 12:47 AM
Exquisitely homoerotic material Edna. I can just envision the semen dripping down your chin. Hahahaha. Hope you enjoy your romps down there in queerville.
on On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove
22 Oct 2007, 12:49 AM
Uh , I mean Poofy Pete. You go girl!
on Be The One by forsaken
22 Oct 2007, 12:54 AM
Wow, this is pretty bad. How old are you? Check out my poem ....it's much more sophisticated. It's a true love story with about a lady friend.
on HATE by forsaken'sbigbro
22 Oct 2007, 12:58 AM
This is better than alot of the other shit I've been reading on this site. I think if you work on some of the lines you could improve this quite a bit. I like your honesty and openness.