on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil
13 Oct 2003, 6:08 PM
I especially like the 3rd + 4th Stanzas. Well done.
on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2003, 6:18 PM
Mourn, but we know you can't spell. Pretty good writer though.10
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:51 AM
There's always another corner, But I'm sure you'll squeek thru'.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:03 PM
One of those raped mountains looks back at me every time I look west. Probably a strip mine for coal, but with the same effect. Sucks huh?
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:08 PM
Of course, I've come in after correction, but I like the theme. Sounds great to me. This is the reason I love this site. Thank Kaolin for me.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:30 PM
I want to bookmark this! YES!!! On Flanders Field, But so much more. I'm going to read this a few more times, but for now 10.10.Love it.Lets hold discussion night on this. Why my stain, my son?Stain of blood, yes I understand. But the context really leaves that open. The internal images I get are the survivors coated with the blood of the wounded, as they try to help. I can't tell you how much I love this one. Thanks, Hope to see it as #1 real soon.
on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 8:37 PM
Youall are sick. SICK! have you no respect. Probably not.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:47 PM
I refuse to comment on the content, But I can feel every line. Well written.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:51 PM
WHAT!!! May that candle never even dim> For both you, and me , And Him. May we forever feel that heat'
Let us never taste defeat. Love your work, It fills me with peace, May these exquisite writings never cease.
Let us never taste defeat. Love your work, It fills me with peace, May these exquisite writings never cease.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 8:57 PM
Slow down with that fancy click and paste thing you've got going. I really like this one, but I see Kaolin didn't care for those ten page prose submissions. I must admit it was even hard for me to read through them, and I like you more than all of them.Keep it simple, some of us are slow.
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:09 PM
WOW, for a second I thought this was about me. SIGH. Well done. How are you special enough even with a poem wanker award, to submit 4???? at a time?
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 9:14 PM
Well! I like it. (Yuor incessant blabber that is) but that prose seems to have struck a note. I often write about not being able to write, Inspiration huh?
on The Breedling by Everyone
17 Oct 2003, 9:19 PM
Now I see why you have 12 hits and only 2 comments. Grow up!
on some deleted poem
17 Oct 2003, 10:27 PM
You are here. You are one of us. I question that every day. I just lost an Annie to something,I'm not sure. I wish that walking a mile in your sodden shoes could bring you back. I would show you the truth.Perhaps you might see it?
on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 11:24 PM
I'm about to use a spanky to wipe up your silly ass. Ms? Ms? Are you trying to piss me off? I'm a woman Like youre gay. (hope yer not a fag)Still, 5
on "I know what you need!" by A. Nomaly
10 Oct 2003, 8:32 PM
Quite possibly the best haiku since Steven King's.
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
Your hair is fine
Like January embers
My heart burns there too
on Diseases dug out with acceptance and the futility of analyzation unless it's at a poetic discourse by A. Nomaly
10 Oct 2003, 8:37 PM
DAMN'I like your Style. Well done.
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
11 Oct 2003, 8:12 AM
I give you another 10 on this most excellent piece, So that my ink driddles might drop below it where they rightfully belong. This one should always be in the #1
on some say somewhat truth by earthwaterair
27 Oct 2003, 6:33 PM
I liked it. It speaks from the heart. May the Sacred Heart of Jesus have mercy on us.