on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
25 Sep 2002, 10:31 PM
Made me smile with this one. Thank you.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 10:30 PM
I see it. I agree with the other commenters. It could be better, with more incubation.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 10:33 PM
Pretty damn moving for a first draft. Are you going to finish it, or lock it away with the tarnished silver?
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 10:36 PM
I have regrets like this as well, friend. A postcard of your life, posted here, this is.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 10:08 PM
I have them too, but in the dry heat of Ninevah, summer.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 10:27 PM
So,
1. boy has new girl
2. boy feels sorry for himself because of old girl, and gets drunk, passing out on new girl
3. girl realize boy prefers bottle to relationship and leaves...?
Yes? That would make Paris even colder.
1. boy has new girl
2. boy feels sorry for himself because of old girl, and gets drunk, passing out on new girl
3. girl realize boy prefers bottle to relationship and leaves...?
Yes? That would make Paris even colder.