on The TRust That Was Unreal by wootness
3 Oct 2002, 8:29 PM
awesome poem!! its easy to relate and made so its not completely personal but justified to fit almost anyone!! in same place right now!!
on some deleted poem
25 Nov 2002, 8:03 AM
yea its kewl i guess but just kinda weird but whatever floats your boat i guess im for. im not really sure.
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2002, 3:21 PM
It's a good poem with a good lesson. You show excellen work but i dont know its really good. sometimes its hard to find the rhyme because something in the sentence rhymes with someone else. most people like the poems that dont have a certain rhyme scheme mine are always like right there!! noticable!! well done!! and i am too a criving writer here!! dont get discouraged by what people say!! ive been dont i show great promise by my teacher. and these people bashed me and my writings. as long as you wrie what you feel then its always true!! dont let them get to you if they're mean. they were me too i think you just have to gain their respect with like a masterpiece and i only began writing so i know it will take time for me!!
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2002, 9:56 AM
It's very lyrical and has a good rhythm. Most non rhyming poems i have difficulty reading but yours was will thought out it seems. I like the desrciption of things as you gave them!! I think you did excellent!
on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit
19 Oct 2002, 6:53 PM
worded well, but i dont think it even comes close to the real thing. my mother had cancer just this past summer. it is worse then you write. maybe it would be better if you really knew what you were talking about!