replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:11 AM
one last thought before i leave...it's funny how you say that limonade's poetry has a young...or "undergrad" feel to it...because the vast majority of my teenage friends think it's great but most of my adult friends say the same kind of stuff you guys do. guess i'll just have to grow up before i can write really good stuff like you and god'swife...once again...no sarcasm. night all
replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:08 AM
gone to bed. thanks for reading them over. hope to chat soon.
replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:07 AM
well sad to say...i need sleep. i have a class in six hours. but thank you for helping me release some anger on a faceless foe...no sarcasm there. i needed to rant. good night to you and god'swife.
replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:05 AM
they were written for my girlfriend at the time...not a good stage in my life...for love or poetry...as you can probably tell
replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:03 AM
is his stuff well known?
replying on Drunken note #1 by blackball
9 Oct 2002, 12:03 AM
well...i was drunk...i don't remember writing them...and my friends told me they were good. i'm asucker for peer pressure
replying on rapping on caffeine by blackball
8 Oct 2002, 11:41 PM
i guess what i meant to say was that we are all frail...we live we die...it's the way life goes...it also might have to do with the fact that iwas thinking it up as i was typing it...i dunno
on why i look like a man by rosiebailey
8 Oct 2002, 10:25 PM
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight
on From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford
7 Oct 2002, 6:03 AM
that's good. are the corners real or metaphorical...cuz if they're real theniwould agree with the lover; it would not be love...but if metaphorical...it makes for a good poem. i'm out 8/10
on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof
7 Oct 2002, 5:39 AM
i like the line about "the artist's discretion". this is gonna sound stupid but after reading comments on this site and seeing how bitchy people can be about other people's work...well truer words have never been said dude. i'm out...please disregard my foolishness
on The day I told her by dalva
7 Oct 2002, 5:26 AM
got blasted eh? yeah it happens to the best of us. no worries. when everything looks to be going sour listen to some deftones and break some shit
on coffee cup by nonee
6 Oct 2002, 10:49 AM
decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself