on Daywalker by Blade
15 Oct 2002, 2:09 PM
You wear plastic fangs, don't you?
on Love by little_angel_maria
15 Oct 2002, 2:04 PM
Typical. Sort of like Sleeping Beauty, waiting to be rescued. Find a better prince.
on Daniela by little_angel_maria
15 Oct 2002, 2:05 PM
Tascobar is right. it just needs to be expressed better.
on Life's Great Irony by Tascobar
16 Oct 2002, 6:43 AM
i see no irony. grab the dictionary you are using to prop up the short leg of the couch and look up the words you use.
on The Power of Green by Tascobar
16 Oct 2002, 6:44 AM
wow, a druggy-poem. not that that's ever been done, and a lot better.
on some deleted poem
16 Oct 2002, 6:51 AM
bye bye. Hope you can write when you get back. I'm sure nobody will have missed you. This is really more of a poorly-written whiny ramble than a poem.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 1:49 PM
fuckin'angels. Shadow, what do you know of angels? For one they are genderless, last I checked. For another, they don't often fuck whiny teenagers, at least after what happened with the Watchers.
on some deleted poem
15 Oct 2002, 1:51 PM
That or a goth kid who spends 16 hours a day talking about how he wants to die occasionally making half-assed attempts to kill himself.
on America by little_angel_maria
15 Oct 2002, 1:59 PM
cliched. childish. stupid beyond belief.
on why? by little_angel_maria
15 Oct 2002, 2:02 PM
I agree you should get help. Mostly in your writing though. Tell it to some therapist, darling. They can be paid to care.