poemranker ::20 most recent comments by timfowler

Comments bytimfowler, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 14 Oct 2002, 4:04 AM
Nicely judged,both technically and emotionally.
on Autumn Songs by timfowler 3 Sep 2002, 12:02 AM
well, read the poem and tell me what *you * think :)
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2002, 2:30 AM
Some nice imagery, but reads like (albeit good) prose broken up into lines to resemble poetry. Language is insufficiently dense for my liking, but there's no doubt you can write, so <5>
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2002, 2:30 AM
Some nice imagery, but reads like (albeit good) prose broken up into lines to resemble poetry. Language is insufficiently dense for my liking, but there's no doubt you can write, so <5>
on Jericho by goldfish 2 Jun 2002, 9:16 AM
This is 2002, not 1902. Try reading something written in the last 20 years and youmight realise how distressingly out of touch this is.
on some deleted poem 28 May 2002, 12:47 AM
try reading some poetry written after 1860.....and learn to spell. 0.
on Do Not Pay Taxes To Feed Those Layabout Scum by ruella 24 May 2002, 2:20 AM
Zero. And frankly you're lucky to get that.
on Icon by timfowler 22 May 2002, 5:45 AM
I thought people might realise that an Icon very often features the Madonna and Child and therefore wouldnt regard it as a "new" subject
on Icon by timfowler 22 May 2002, 5:47 AM
Thanks for your kind comments: if the poem leaves you feeling unsatisfied I'm kind of glad, since its trying to express feelings of deep personal dissatisfaction: there *is* no neat conclusion or end to the argument: thats the point.
on Equinox by timfowler 3 Sep 2002, 5:38 AM
thankyou.
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2002, 2:29 AM
Some nice imagery, but reads like (albeit good) prose broken up into lines to resemble poetry. Language is insufficiently dense for my liking, but there's no doubt you can writ, so <5>
on Icon by timfowler 3 Jun 2002, 1:25 AM
Well I'd least I'd know a good poem if walked up and punched me, unlike yourself. Have a nice day.