on A lighthouse by emilyowey
18 Nov 2002, 2:21 PM
hey your poem has a really good sceme, but it was supposed to be happy and i got sad, but i really liked the way things rolled
on some deleted poem
1 Dec 2002, 7:07 AM
i thought it was a great poem and the last 2 lines really explained and summed up the poem, great job!