poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Beaner99

Comments byBeaner99, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on two poles are better than one by <~> 27 Nov 2002, 8:06 AM
This is great. I think the last stanza is perfect
on some deleted poem 27 Nov 2002, 8:11 AM
Maybe only use the word Shock once at the end...
on memory by Goose 27 Nov 2002, 8:13 AM
Short and to the point and hard hitting. Good Stuff.
on Dust by Caducus 2 Dec 2002, 6:07 PM
wonderful...9