on Ode to my mentor by UAFANTHORPEY
30 Nov 2002, 8:52 AM
Quite poignant and heart felt. Worthy of a 5 but if lack of brevity you were to fix, at least a 6.
on Recent History by Nicholas Jones
30 Nov 2002, 8:38 AM
Not bad but reads more like an essay than a poem. Wish it was more, only a four