poemranker ::20 most recent comments by deep-as-a-puddle

Comments bydeep-as-a-puddle, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 23 Dec 2002, 1:31 PM
I really liked the first 3 lines then the contrast and vocabulary faded
on Xmas gifts list by lunar 28 Jul 2003, 3:02 PM
fake, originality is nothing if it dosent come from the heart and this sounds as if you have tried to use metaphors cleaverly instead of speaking what you treuly feel...therefore the poem is to impress rather than to express your emotion? pah what do i know!
on The Birds by lunar 1 Jan 2003, 3:23 PM
IT DOSENT RHYME, AGHHHHHH! i really didnt like this the first time i read it but when u told me what it was about it all feel into place! its actually really deep! tr??s impressed!
on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar 29 Dec 2002, 11:45 AM
My crotch is a dark and evil place! i forbid ne of you to visit it! ass for it being up some strangers ass, ur completly and utterly correct! How did u ever discover this?
and hey come on, we were all 15 once! PSMA
on one word by Blade 23 Dec 2002, 1:45 PM
HMMM, the poem has such potential, the first stanza is filled with anger and passion but as the poem draws to a final conclusion the overal objective is somehwta lost between the C and the K...close but only a 9!
on Xmas gifts list by lunar 15 Dec 2002, 2:29 PM
Kool poem dude! I think love will bring him suffering tho!
Poetandknowit...hahaha what a brilliant name!...!