poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jsylum

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on some deleted poem 10 Jul 2002, 1:30 PM
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Thank you, you're right, I do mean defects, I should have realized, I guess I overlooked it, I do not edit much of what I write sometimes. I do know what defection means, sooo...I guess I'll have to change it elsewhere, or I'll have to delete all the votes.
on Beauty, Beware by Jsylum 19 Jul 2002, 2:38 PM
dissatisfaction comes with the poem...in all its many forms
on Beauty, Beware by Jsylum 19 Jul 2002, 3:02 PM
thank you,
I myself don't quite know where the inspiration came from.
I set out to write something, because I feel I had to, but I didn't know what to write......after the first few lines, i thought of the title, and from there I moved on...and completed the poem in one night. No edits.