on some deleted poem
11 Feb 2003, 7:04 AM
I can kind of itentify here !
on The Tuesday Dogs by Caducus
11 Feb 2003, 7:07 AM
Oh i liked this one. Dead dog walking !!!!!
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 7:03 AM
Loved it !
on some deleted poem
9 Jan 2003, 8:01 AM
I hope they get cataracts and bump into each other
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 1:54 AM
Beautiful. 9. I knew all along that he isn't there.
on The bouchon by Bachus
7 Jan 2003, 12:51 AM
Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
on The bouchon by Bachus
7 Jan 2003, 12:52 AM
Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
on some deleted poem
7 Jan 2003, 1:32 AM
"He wears his solitude about him"
is superb. Bit confused about the blossoming rosebushes in the seemingly winter theme (i've probably missed the point) All the same, take a 7
is superb. Bit confused about the blossoming rosebushes in the seemingly winter theme (i've probably missed the point) All the same, take a 7
on some deleted poem
6 Jan 2003, 5:27 AM
Made me want to hang myself..
Perhaps cuckoo instead of crow: the most selfish of all birds.
Perhaps cuckoo instead of crow: the most selfish of all birds.
on Exiting Shadows by Caducus
6 Jan 2003, 5:38 AM
You paint fire and hell on a canvas
of black.
Let down only by repetition of "forever", "demons" and "Shadows"
Do not think me disingenuous, I enjoyed the indulgence.
of black.
Let down only by repetition of "forever", "demons" and "Shadows"
Do not think me disingenuous, I enjoyed the indulgence.
If you didn't feel it then you are nothing.