Comments byhorus8, 1621–1640 back. Include replies

on A Sea by Ellie95 8 Mar 2003, 11:07 AM
destruction.
on The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus 8 Mar 2003, 11:08 AM
blasphemy.
on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:19 PM
This poem is clearly about seperatism, and how to fight against the evil with in one's sole

"toilets overflow"
"Jackson Pollock"
"roll a blunt"
"Josef Stalin"
"cauldron"
"shepherd's lithium"
"How dare you claim me mad!"

All quotes proving my point.

Thank you folks, i'm here all night too.
on Floating in mindless clutter of words by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:23 PM
"unicorns in the forest" but this is clearly a sign of a child hood molesting repressed into faiery tale symbolism. (i forget this one on my earlier list) i do like this poem though... it tastes like granola but has the texture of caviar? interesting.
on The Poet by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:54 PM
It was great up until the last line.

You weren't suppose to delete the poem (fetus) Brandon. You were suppose to debate the opinion of felled fetus' everywhere and why they matter too. That is what a poet would have done, and also; he or she would not of erased it. Because then i would of told you a secret, and you would of went ohhhhhhhhhh, and we would have been friends. Forever. P.s. the activity above seems strange for a male model. It sound more like something a teacher would write. You lied to me professor, shame on you! I'm sure she was hot when she was younger though and still is. What makes you think i don't like old people?
on The Poet by wLeBlancw 9 Mar 2003, 8:59 PM
See this is more your speed a little counter culture jazz baby, yeah diggit.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/thesalesman.mp3
on some deleted poem 11 Mar 2003, 1:04 PM
did you repeat words like blood, land, calm, morning and flesh to stress your point? Because it is mighty close to screwing your message and this poem up, but great title and message, none the less.
on The Innocent by wLeBlanc IIIw 11 Mar 2003, 1:07 PM
Your ability to name drop is profound, but your poetry aint.
on good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit 11 Mar 2003, 1:11 PM
High yeildings in pharmaceudicals?
on Family Portrait by Mr Pig 11 Mar 2003, 1:17 PM
"Dad would walk in a talcum cloud," great line.

I would end this not "And smile!" but

Smile

that's why your not grabbing the tens.8.
on some deleted poem 11 Mar 2003, 6:30 PM
And they say i'm nuts.
on our little secret by famenglory 12 Mar 2003, 1:55 AM
if you weren't crippled and counting herpes i'd stick your fucking organ up your ass without your trusty shoehorn james. 4 wheeldrive is better then two.
on Saline drip to the eye by INTRANSIT 12 Mar 2003, 1:58 AM
GQT AWARDE 10!
on Goin? Down Baby by Drummer 12 Mar 2003, 2:01 AM
yes, shit don't mean shit.
on Date Rape Gang Bang by Bachus 12 Mar 2003, 4:37 PM
Yes, mail order.
on Knights of progress 'alter boy shamed' by Bachus 12 Mar 2003, 4:40 PM
Gerbal fodder, go away.
on What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage 12 Mar 2003, 5:28 PM
Jesus, don't they all... Please God, just send the aliens with the anal probe back. I'm either fucking home-sick, or so psychic, tomorrows yesterday again. Blarg, i'm gonna cook this ground hog once and for all.
on Falling Out Of Love by Sawa 12 Mar 2003, 5:34 PM
reverse your name, and add an h. awash, but with what? I feel a warm bath full of pink carnations and vanilla salt coming on. I just bought some plum scented candles too. I think i'll play my new album while I soak. It's called 'Jesus was Jew too so sue' by the Chirpets.
on Fate by Dostoyevsky 12 Mar 2003, 5:36 PM
Boy, when you pick your titles you really go out on a limb. That should be your next title "limbs".
on some deleted poem 12 Mar 2003, 11:36 PM
All over my bullets and everything.