on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2002, 3:36 PM
more utopians. jesus.
on Mangled by Carvaceous
29 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
malchovich..malchovich..malchovich.p
on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2002, 5:56 PM
"two fragile breasts"
"my mediocre nose"
what? no trout pond?
"my mediocre nose"
what? no trout pond?
on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2002, 5:58 PM
fall might be drop, but the balls should definitely be idling chainsaws.
on some deleted poem
29 Dec 2002, 11:03 PM
NEVER! my trout. my precious.
on some deleted poem
30 Dec 2002, 6:18 PM
thanks settle. i couldn't of said it better myself. i owe you one.
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 12:52 PM
cut vertically, not horizontally for a quicker bleeding. did you mean for this poem to be unspecific and universal? it's pretty good. 7
on Track.... by Topaz Servias
1 Jan 2003, 5:56 PM
jesus christ.??
on Forgotten by famenglory
1 Jan 2003, 6:18 PM
"Here's a secret, as the hourglass turns, you don't get any younger"you're kidding? nice secret, by the way you are really on a role now..here let me help you out.0 why? because you're metaphoric, and genuine.t
on the play by famenglory
1 Jan 2003, 6:25 PM
"orsmiles on thier" before you attempt to get crafty nb you should, perhaps. spell check.
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 6:43 PM
good call.h
on She Seeks To Know Me by newdawnfades
1 Jan 2003, 6:48 PM
"and lost like tears in rain." try
lost as my tears in her rain.
"through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a
lost as my tears in her rain.
"through my body, in to my soul." how about 'into instead of in to...?a
on The Nagian, or, Red Be Unread by <~>
1 Jan 2003, 6:56 PM
did you sell me out the other day to that newbie?t
on unsent by Bill Z Bub
1 Jan 2003, 7:05 PM
an unsent letter?GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD...A POEMRANKER MUST READ..wonder no longer.@
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
2 Jan 2003, 3:05 PM
yes. i do. this is a great and grand poem. golden que tip. 10.
on Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger
2 Jan 2003, 3:09 PM
and whoever gavev this a zero, shouuld immeiately go wash their mouth out with soup, that's right...i said soup. motherfucker, sorry for the french, but this poem does not deserve a zero, or anything less than a six, and i'll prove that. watch.a
on The dance by purplestain
3 Jan 2003, 1:42 AM
sorry, i thought you were a girl i new from butterfield, minn. if you can believe that....strong poem, simple, and see how well it worked! a universal theme and feel to it, i wouldn't be suprised if more people responded to this the way i did. have an eight.
on Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Jan 2003, 3:06 AM
hey da. did i do this right? i'm unsure.