on New commandments by little_big_nose
11 Jan 2004, 10:29 PM
"Tho"? What are you stupid? The word is 'thou' you fucking ass. You should paint ball the inside of your mouth you fucking daft tit.
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2003, 1:03 PM
Lovely. 10
on some deleted poem
15 Dec 2003, 8:38 PM
I finished it, and that's saying a lot. lol.
The third stanza is the weakest, and ironically, that's what it's about. And since it's the crux that's where it should be the strongest.
The third stanza is the weakest, and ironically, that's what it's about. And since it's the crux that's where it should be the strongest.
on The ballad of woosie by rosiebailey
15 Dec 2003, 12:13 PM
anal warts. 911
on Me, myself and I. by darby pyn
15 Dec 2003, 12:23 PM
That's lesson 1. Second grades over there --->
on Rebel Spirits by miraclemaker
15 Dec 2003, 12:25 PM
"fuck the pimps in striphouses
entrapping and stealing free
souls desperate to profit on
the exhibition of sexuality." This one's a bit off.
I believe there's more here at work than what you've given us, but the rest are tight. Here's a 9.
entrapping and stealing free
souls desperate to profit on
the exhibition of sexuality." This one's a bit off.
I believe there's more here at work than what you've given us, but the rest are tight. Here's a 9.
on high school tragedy number six by FreeFormFixation
15 Dec 2003, 12:35 PM
Stick shift abortion.
on Modern Man by ShaNoN+960317485
20 Dec 2003, 12:29 PM
What truly impressed me about this poem was my inability to even get through the first line, bravo brilliant.
on Paint Remover by Samantha
20 Dec 2003, 12:35 PM
I often find running over something at a high rate of speed alleviates this sort of tension.
on some deleted poem
11 Jan 2004, 3:54 PM
What's up freak?
on So Much**coment this sucks. I want to make it better by Freethinker1602
27 Jan 2004, 12:05 PM
Well... that was an exploding lukewarm dildo.
on some deleted poem
20 Feb 2004, 3:54 PM
Dude, you dare smear of the Spuna in the same bun as CLS? Are you mad, you've done us a severe injustice here, you trout speckle.
on some deleted poem
20 Feb 2004, 4:00 PM
Christ, this is a deflating pickle getting gangraped by some spilt mustard if I've ever seen such a thing. Congratulations on your custom idiocy, I hope it's contagious, and you kill yourself and millions of others that could care less! :)
on Saying of Love by UrbaneSavvy
20 Feb 2004, 6:56 PM
I bet you think you're heaven bound?
on Quest! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
20 Feb 2004, 7:13 PM
Dave, the only thing mysterious about you is how your bike hasn't exploded yet spraying speckled bananna seat all about the park trail.
on some deleted poem
20 Feb 2004, 7:16 PM
By the way asshat? (urbane savvy) Would you say you suck in the illiteral sense? Because you do, and frightenly so. your poetry is so fucking unbelievably boring and strait, you could wind a fart.
on some deleted poem
20 Feb 2004, 9:16 PM
Rebecca, I love you.
on some deleted poem
21 Mar 2004, 12:51 PM
Nice thesis 5.
Overall, I can't really concur because
you said absolutely squat.
But I gave you a 5, because you're my nigger Joe.
Overall, I can't really concur because
you said absolutely squat.
But I gave you a 5, because you're my nigger Joe.