poemranker ::20 most recent comments by savagemikel

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on some deleted poem 11 Jul 2002, 10:45 PM
Funny and some really good parts. Ending particularly is weak though. Beginning is kind of jumpstarted. I like 2nd verse best.
on Jericho by goldfish 9 Jul 2002, 10:44 AM
Some part struggle a bit, others are just brilliant. The marble and rose thing particularly very nice. Thanks
on Rant by blkarak 14 Feb 2004, 5:59 AM
It's very good I think. Very good. Poems like this are a bit dense for my personal taste. I mean for reading.
When I do read it, I picture it more as a spoken piece. I think it would be great for that.
on If When We Die by lynnkyle 13 Feb 2004, 3:16 PM
It's a lovely sentiment.
I like the writing of the first part better than the second part.
Finally, I can't avoid the logical bump that you are wishing the person you speak of dead before you though. ;-)
Which just leaves me with this crystalization... I love you and I want you dead. ;-)
No offense I hope. I really enjoy so much of it.