on some deleted poem
26 Jan 2003, 3:36 PM
I think at the end of the chorus...you should say..and lupos too.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:00 PM
Tis I!
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
24 Jan 2003, 4:44 PM
This is totally unacceptable and also, shit.
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2003, 4:15 PM
I was hoping that when he unfurled the carpet Richard Nixon would be in their performing an exorcism upon the hobo's crotch trying to figur out where the lemon scent was originating from (never really noticing the lemon tree growing out of his ass from his days with the quakers) and then to have ended the story with say a full scrotismal equinox with solar gas and crab nebula cookies and stuff an such? Therefore, you only recieve the nine of balled twine with a dash of safron.
on some deleted poem
30 Jan 2003, 12:06 PM
"that stuttered stop " that stutter stopped would work better. Also i would lose a third of the poem, and just title it as the process. Find more of a visualy pleasing form to the stanza structure. Make the ending count a little more next time. For instance while she's not looking put your face and mouth under the draft spout. crook thee arm at the elbow. I once met a guy from Missouri who killed a dangerously ill manicured 'street poete' in a moment of sexual repression and masculine confusion while wearing biker tights and a fanny pack. Gruesome, but then the street poete turned into a zombie and did the thriller on his face..Brains anyone? they are almost fresh..a
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:11 PM
Yes, and with properly applied scientology...i can take it all WITH JESUS, JESUS, POETRY, JESUS AHHHHHHHHHHH!!
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:09 PM
Never...BECAUSE JESUS IS IN YOUR SOLE! you just have to reach in there and pull him out for a chat and hug.
on the play by famenglory
24 Jan 2003, 6:17 PM
Your turn...IN THE NAME OF GOD..I REBUKE YOU, CAST YOU PUT EVIL DEMON!
by the way..what play was it?
ummmm this poem made me feel very alive and wholesome.
by the way..what play was it?
ummmm this poem made me feel very alive and wholesome.
on Forgotten by famenglory
24 Jan 2003, 6:22 PM
This must be the part where you earn fame and glory in the name of your stance against it (?) brilliant and the rhyme scheme..very og...that's the first thing that should change in te re-education of this country...and that's choosing teams in school..what a terrible thing to do to a child's mind..tsk.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 4:51 PM
I feel that this deserves high marks, though i'm not quite sure how this voting system works?
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:02 PM
That sets.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:04 PM
Jesus!
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:05 PM
Suck that top stanza in missy. JESUS LIVES!
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:06 PM
Weird? ....HE GIVES SWEET JESUS GIVES!!!!!!!
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:08 PM
The lord of supper good sweet succulent greens and sprouts jesus please sweet little baby sssshhhh...LIVES! good poem too.3
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 6:20 PM
Like the indian with the stick in walking tall? You are missing a few ''''si
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 6:22 PM
Do you know which road your traveling on? Because, if you do let me know, so that i wont accidentaly merge onto it.
on alms by famenglory
24 Jan 2003, 6:24 PM
I'm not even going to go into how i visualised this finely crafted poeme.
on Why my cock attracts idiots by horus8
24 Jan 2003, 4:47 PM
Ding dong the witch is dead.
on some deleted poem
24 Jan 2003, 6:14 PM
That was refreshing.. Thank you..you have a cleansed me and healed me with your poetry here today, and between me and you..i feel like a new person, thanks. i love you.