on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
6 Jun 2003, 9:09 AM
8 take it or leave it Mister
on Fire And Fuck by Bonehiss
17 Apr 2003, 1:42 AM
Its crazy 6
on some deleted poem
21 Jul 2003, 1:06 PM
I must learn to tighten from you, this is a great example of why I like your work. 9
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 8:40 AM
0.
on Nonentities by scitz
19 Jun 2003, 3:35 PM
Good
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 8:39 AM
Not one of your best but at least my little mind understood this one 6
on Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom
1 Jul 2003, 8:42 AM
This made me want to stand at the bottom of the sea. Way long, nuff said 5
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2003, 9:11 AM
Brill,
here's a pavarotti for ya.
here's a pavarotti for ya.
on C a n n i b a l by scitz
6 Jun 2003, 1:55 AM
Macabre 8
on some deleted poem
6 Jun 2003, 1:55 AM
But your haiku don't rock man 5
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
22 May 2003, 2:53 AM
Beautifully observed and usual a pristine work from you Mr Pig. Full marks to you.
on some deleted poem
18 May 2003, 3:33 AM
Kaolin: a fine day used in ceramics and refactories and as a filler or coating for paper and textiles.
(from the American Heritiage Dictionary)
I'm more confused now than ever before.
(from the American Heritiage Dictionary)
I'm more confused now than ever before.
on Death Of A Rose (New draft) by Mr Pig
27 Apr 2003, 6:25 AM
Simplistic, beautiful and ironic - I loved it. 10
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus
1 Jul 2003, 8:36 AM
P.F.G
on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha
30 Sep 2004, 5:25 AM
good effort
on Cold Afternoon. by Sasha
30 Sep 2004, 5:25 AM
last 2 lines do not rhyme on a sonnet
on A season of construction by fair12
30 Sep 2004, 5:26 AM
kind of dinged my dong :7