| Re: Invisible too by horus8 |
31-Jul-02/2:36 PM |
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I am glad you are still on the hoof.
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24-Jul-02/12:28 PM |
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Why Beakism's is a Haiku, this is not? Can you please explain?
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| Re: Coloring Loss by molly |
31-Jul-02/5:35 AM |
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I like the vivid images. But I don't like following the traditional sterotype of associating all negatives and nils with black.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Jul-02/8:28 AM |
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are you talking about masturbation?
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| Re: Daily Rutein by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/1:45 PM |
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The poetic atmosphere is more involving, the emotions are deeper. Good poem.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
31-Jul-02/1:48 PM |
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Ask a Professor of Psychology and Christian Humanist to solve your confusion!
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| Re: Why Work? by TheTiredTyrant |
31-Jul-02/2:02 PM |
After a life of tyranny/Tired, exhausted like a granny/ You do not want to do any job/ In Wall street, a restaurant, or a shop?
Then why blame poor computer/
Which serves every one better and better?
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| Re: Invisible too by horus8 |
31-Jul-02/2:12 PM |
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This is perfect and beautiful, horus. I know you are rebellious and sombre most of the time [which is not uninteresting], but let us see your sober side too. I give you nine.
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| Re: Invisible too by horus8 |
31-Jul-02/2:21 PM |
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| Re: What R U? by kawakurdi |
31-Jul-02/2:28 PM |
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I know. I must admit I borrowed your title. The original title is Shadow. Thank you for your appreciation.
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| Re: Prophecy by New Life Drug |
31-Jul-02/1:39 PM |
If you are thirteen, did you right
your first poem in your mother's womb? Perhaps you should have stayed there, there is no such thing as life. Stay.
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| Re: HOW DO I WRITE by kawakurdi |
31-Jul-02/5:23 AM |
Thanx for this expalanation. British English 's' is 'z' in American Englsih in many words: verbs and nouns. You gave examples. Another is
organis[z]ation.
Thanks for being so positive about the poem.
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| Re: haiku by silentcat |
31-Jul-02/7:05 AM |
I like my sweet seventeen/
I kiss her and hug her/
But she may still be
an underage haiku!
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| Re: Painty by wlshepherd |
29-Jul-02/12:20 PM |
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The combination or rather the unity of image and thought [paint] is well maintained from the beginning to end with an excellent end. Clear, readable, interesting and innovative.
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| Re: Cour by Cha no Onna |
29-Jul-02/10:58 AM |
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28-Jul-02/2:08 AM |
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Thank you horus8 , now I put the pieces back together. I like juicy mango.
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| Re: Reverse Pschology by Mister Cakes |
27-Jul-02/5:45 PM |
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If you can't spell psychology how can you reverse it?
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-Jul-02/3:05 AM |
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Can't you react like grown ups? Or typical reaction of scratched egoes?
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| Re: The Haiku by beakism |
23-Jul-02/3:22 PM |
Some only write Haikus
To draw attention, too much
Undeserved.
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| Re: What R U? by kawakurdi |
31-Jul-02/1:08 PM |
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I wrote the poem originally in my native language then translated it, thus losing some essential music and mythical hue. Thank you for your comment.
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