poemranker ::20 most recent comments by <~> (521-540) and replies

Comments by<~>, 521–540 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Black Magic by <{Baba^Yaga}> 6 Apr 2003, 9:15 PM
i get it. dissonance. :}

but the rhyme feels forced, so that one line can't be the whole point of the poem, right? i mean, it's a poem, not an illustration. or have you been a naughty boy with settle? did he rub off on you?
on Voodoo on channel 13 by Bachus 6 Apr 2003, 9:13 PM
take . . . the pin . . . OUT!!!!
on "Life can sure be a motherfucker." by <{Baba^Yaga}> 4 Apr 2003, 8:46 PM
appropriate, dead center, and beautiful.
i inaugurate the Voracious Ouroboros Awarde, granting it to you, for you willingness to augur with your own intestines. (even the fucking title eats itself)
on Last Night’s Dream (Freud-o-riffic) by razorgrin 4 Apr 2003, 2:09 PM
fuckity fuck!
on Prayer for Peace by razorgrin 4 Apr 2003, 1:56 PM
http://www.mnftiu.cc/mnftiu.cc/war.html
2, 2, 2 requests in 1!!!!

on All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin 4 Apr 2003, 1:55 PM
athena! athena! let down thy buns!

hahahah! nice.
on The Strength Of Thomas by OneFingerAnswer 3 Apr 2003, 2:19 PM
eyes see, but that does not make it real. eyes can be fooled, and easily too. still, i like this.
on I shot speed by horus8 3 Apr 2003, 2:14 PM
fine. how's ham on rye? and you can get your own goddamn coffee.
on Adios Poemranker. by scitz 3 Apr 2003, 10:49 AM
don't go!!! come back!!!
on Blood And Iron by intheailse 3 Apr 2003, 8:16 AM
ita--this has a lot of potential. your last stanza is awkward; you've forced it to fit. check your punctuation, as well. nice job.
on sic homina ad papyrum by bondjedi 3 Apr 2003, 7:40 AM
oh my, this made me chuckle.

thanks for a laugh.
replying on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10 1 Apr 2003, 4:27 PM
again, thank you for making my point for me. you have my permission to pray for my soul. you might as well pray for p&k's too, just because i know it'll piss him off.
replying on 2 Haiku by Blindproject217 1 Apr 2003, 12:54 PM
check out the 'help' button on the tp left of the page:
Haiku

The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).

It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
replying on fever by <~> 1 Apr 2003, 10:55 AM
ah, my pig!
perhaps you should attend the cavalcade of poets in may? for i'll be across the pond, and looking for guidance as to the best ales, ESBs and IPAs in town! Olde Cad knows the details. ta.

xo,

z
replying on fever by <~> 1 Apr 2003, 7:32 AM
mark your calendar then. i expect to meet a female companion, as well!
replying on fever by <~> 1 Apr 2003, 7:15 AM
but May will be the most exciting, when the poets converge on London. It's looking like the last weekend in May, , Mr. Tof.
replying on Normal by elizabethann 31 Mar 2003, 2:52 PM
see http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=45655 for a lovely description of skin.
replying on fever by <~> 31 Mar 2003, 2:09 PM
once i've been sprung, i will. alls i needs is a good muse, metaphorically speaking, of course.

watch for it.
replying on Jack by MuDvAyNe 31 Mar 2003, 11:47 AM
zero's not gay; he's an omnivore. if he's got 2 pints in him and you stand still for half a minute, you're peeling him off your leg.

(sorry zero.)
on Unlocking Happiness by darkhelmet10 31 Mar 2003, 11:40 AM
damn. i read the title fast, and i thought it said, "unCOCKing happiness". it's that damn kthulah, and her prettycock poem, getting me mind on one track. sigh.