on Awesome Heir by Shin-Bojangles
18 Aug 2002, 5:58 AM
shouldn't 'sweet' be SWEET?
on sky by youngweirdo
18 Aug 2002, 5:51 AM
you tried harder with this one, but you're still not saying anything.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:33 PM
and the crustaceans are going wilde
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:26 PM
well if the cistercians are cisternian, i suspect they'd wear brown ones.... or maybe a brownish yellow, due to all the vegetables last night?
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:16 PM
don't you mean cisternian?
on Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless
17 Aug 2002, 10:12 PM
so that's what that tickling sensation was...
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 10:02 PM
i'll be happier when the capon's home to roost. put your masterpiece back up, if you like. i laughed my ass off when i saw the title o' this one.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
17 Aug 2002, 9:53 PM
touche.
on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
17 Aug 2002, 12:00 PM
madness spawns many ideas. hieronymus himself was a tad tetched. still, there is much good to be had here, and an edit would prolly do it right.
on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
17 Aug 2002, 10:34 AM
razor-i like the way you take me there, but it feels uneven when i say it aloud. i want to be hyp-mo-tized by it, and in shock, look down at my larval body. consider a re-write?
on lover rock by roses are read
17 Aug 2002, 9:43 AM
"but you're involved" this bit trips it up. last 2 lines need to be re-written. other than that, very tight.
on ''*Night*'' by youngweirdo
17 Aug 2002, 9:16 AM
twinkle twinkle little "*Night*"/how you fill me with such fright/air is hot but wind is cold/rhymes are obvious, subject, old/writer of "*Night*" please try again/ this time don't consult your friends.
on Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless
17 Aug 2002, 9:10 AM
hahahahahahahaha!!!!!!
on fear by pitchblackdisaster
17 Aug 2002, 9:09 AM
if the desire is great enough, you will find a way to know it. always, there is a price for knowledge
on fear by pitchblackdisaster
17 Aug 2002, 8:33 AM
f-babe, do a search. how old are you, anyway, that you don't know that the silver platter is a myth? ah, i see, you do not realize that you are guided from the depths...
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 9:12 PM
then again, maybe i'm a stalker.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 9:11 PM
ogle ogle ogle ogle. oops. sorry. got stuck there for a minute. hey p&k, for one who claims they can't follow me, you and i sure do find each other often enough. maybe doylum was right, and i am having a tryst. maybe it's with you...
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 7:54 PM
i always loved freddie too. miss his voice.