on Afraid to love you by lil cindy lu who
30 May 2003, 4:17 PM
this is very good
on The Bleeding Rose by BleedingRose
30 May 2003, 4:26 PM
our poetry is always work in progress...but the best thing about poetry..it is our innermost feelings...all in all I would say the poem has redeeming qualities...maybe a little work here and there but still a moving poem