on James Dean by horus8
30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
brilliant
on some deleted poem
14 Aug 2002, 4:31 PM
Zeppelinesque
on some deleted poem
23 Mar 2003, 7:22 PM
very sexy! write more about your fantasies, by all means!
on some deleted poem
4 Jan 2003, 8:31 PM
brilliant. i like how you really got booted rather than just making it up.
on From the Ashes of Descartes by Quarton
4 Jan 2003, 8:32 PM
more like from the ass of descartes
on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl
4 Jan 2003, 8:35 PM
mawkish and trite with creepy undertones of incest. I give it a ten!
on my journey--or the beginning of... by blurryphotograph
4 Jan 2003, 8:29 PM
a Nike commercial meets The Hobbit
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
6 Dec 2002, 9:28 AM
mawkish and trite. As substantial as a United Way commercial.
on An Enchanting Vision of Beauty by dalva
30 Oct 2002, 9:13 PM
This is prose
on some deleted poem
30 Oct 2002, 9:14 PM
the essence of the education system. a masterpiece!
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 4:26 PM
hope within the belly? you mean below the belly, i'm sure
on Lysander cried by bornagainpoet
20 Sep 2002, 11:53 PM
I doubt your parents are pleased. 2 thumbs down
on Frail Monsters/Wounded Souls by Wulf
20 Sep 2002, 11:55 PM
There are as many stanzas to your poem as there were in Jesus' lifetimes, 33.
This poem is 33 stanzas too long.
This poem is 33 stanzas too long.
on Russian Roulette by <~>
20 Sep 2002, 11:57 PM
I would change the title to "5 out of 6 Dentists" or something vague. Otherwise, good poem.
on some deleted poem
7 Aug 2002, 7:37 PM
Jim Morrison meets JRR Tolkien
on some deleted poem
6 Dec 2002, 9:22 AM
It's like a kick in the teeth.
on some deleted poem
25 Sep 2002, 12:48 AM
Reminiscent of the Counting Crows
on Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom
26 Sep 2002, 4:24 PM
compact and clever
on Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom
26 Sep 2002, 4:27 PM
the ol' 9-3-1 haiku. of course!