poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Birdpia and replies

Comments byBirdpia, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on smile by nolan 19 Jul 2003, 8:25 AM
in your line sixth, there's a typo "sacry" ? and erm, 'zombie' in this touching poem breaks the poem :/ but i like your wording, it makes people touching in some part.. i give you 7
on Summer Rain by DJCARTER 19 Jul 2003, 8:15 AM
It shows what you meant very clearly and I'm touched deeply... 8, though the rhyme in second stanza looks broken..
on but i was by nolan 19 Jul 2003, 8:07 AM
I Think I gotta change my mind, I re-read it over and I just feel.. it's really good!! Nice idea anyway. I changed from 8 to 9! ;) - I didn't want to be that guy but unfortunately I was!
on but i was by nolan 19 Jul 2003, 8:07 AM
I Think I gotta change that, I re-read it over and I just feel.. it's really good!! Nice idea anyway. I changed from 8 to 9! ;) - I didn't want to be that guy but unfortunately I was!
on but i was by nolan 18 Jul 2003, 11:38 PM
You don't want to be, but you was. Nice one 8! :)