on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2002, 9:20 AM
Get this guy a life man!!! He should go out, Try Ii, If you like it, do it, if you dont, try it you might like it. Still 1010...
on Arts stare by Art Glocken
27 Jul 2002, 8:40 AM
I like this. It has a lot of elements to it. Water, Flowers, Bees, all very natural, which is what good poets use. This is a good first attempt, let down by a mysoginist tone.
on ? by Nimrod's son
27 Jul 2002, 8:44 AM
I like this, it reminds me of a crossword that i did yesterday, 1 down....couldnt get it for a toffee....
on the queue by Nimrod's son
27 Jul 2002, 8:51 AM
Like it, its almost like im there, queueing in a Mcdonalds waiting for that elusive cheeseburger...turns out to be soggy...
on Painting by Art Glocken
27 Jul 2002, 8:55 AM
What the writer is on about i dont know. To me it represents a wall in a kids playroom, when some brat has put there grubby little fingers all over it....angst-ridden.
on Ambition? by TheTiredTyrant
23 Jul 2002, 10:16 AM
Reminds me of a girl i once knew.
on The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes
22 Jul 2002, 4:07 PM
My first reaction was complexity, i undersatnd the writers grief, but i feel he has created a paradox for himself in his lack of content. At present, it just looks like a simple stalker poem, a kinda art nouvea rip off of teh late 1950's stalker poems of the late Jay Durham.
on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant
22 Jul 2002, 4:27 PM
Wow. There is so much anger and hate in this poem, i just want to go and give the writer a hug. Inspiring.
on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant
22 Jul 2002, 4:27 PM
Wow. There is so much anger and hate in this poem, i just want to go and give the writer a hug. Inspiring.