on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin
22 Jul 2003, 2:32 PM
That's what dictionaries are for, dude.
on some deleted poem
21 Jul 2003, 8:35 PM
Pretty good, but spellcheck is your friend.
on Dear Lord by simone_girard
21 Jul 2003, 8:47 PM
Dear Lord, please hear my prayer tonight,
For my husband has had a terrible fright.
His dear old mother has taken ill
And this is a void I cannot fill.
She's suffered now for years and years
And there have been so many tears,
But none of these were out of joy
And my husband's gone from a man to a boy.
If she should die this family would be halved
And it would be a long time before we laughed.
So please, dear Lord, take away her pain,
So we can see her smile again,
For her place can be filled by no other,
For this place in our hearts is for our dear mother.
Now, in you, I place my trust and love,
In you, dear Lord, in heaven above.
There? Are you happy? It's the same poem, only grammatically correct, and it STILL sucks.
For my husband has had a terrible fright.
His dear old mother has taken ill
And this is a void I cannot fill.
She's suffered now for years and years
And there have been so many tears,
But none of these were out of joy
And my husband's gone from a man to a boy.
If she should die this family would be halved
And it would be a long time before we laughed.
So please, dear Lord, take away her pain,
So we can see her smile again,
For her place can be filled by no other,
For this place in our hearts is for our dear mother.
Now, in you, I place my trust and love,
In you, dear Lord, in heaven above.
There? Are you happy? It's the same poem, only grammatically correct, and it STILL sucks.
on Love by simone_girard
21 Jul 2003, 8:42 PM
This is like a creepy cross between a girl scout song and that kid's prayer, as in, "Love is something if you give it away," and "When I lay me down to sleep." In conclusion, you suck, you die, 1.
on some deleted poem
21 Jul 2003, 8:33 PM
You get a 1 cuz you know who David Bowie is. <g> Man...