on some deleted poem
6 Sep 2003, 5:05 PM
Yes, a statement.
on Babelfish Poetry (II): Rendu plus Doux (Français) by Geschäftsreise
7 Sep 2003, 6:45 AM
beau, dans cela a maladroitement traduit la manière.
on Babelfish Poetry (III): Segen (Deutsch) by Geschäftsreise
7 Sep 2003, 1:22 PM
Welcher bist du? Reisender? Arbeiter? Denker? Schöpfer, oder alles? Selbstportrait?
on My Id and I by William Delacroix
7 Sep 2003, 1:34 PM
Very nice. I liked the simpler sections "My id and I..." contrasted with the more explanatory stanzas, and how the id induced desires lacked punctuation. You could turn this in for a Psychology 101 assignment.
on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub
6 Sep 2003, 4:59 PM
Very nice, but changing from "she/her" to "you" was a little confusing. 9
on A very special thank you to a very special someone by Livvie
6 Sep 2003, 5:03 PM
Hmm. Ancestor or infant or someone else? I think the idea of Whitney Houston's "I will always love you" takes away from the piece.
on Babelfish Poetry (I): A pérola (Português) by Geschäftsreise
7 Sep 2003, 7:19 AM
Welcher Fremdsprache? Nicht italienisch oder spanisch?
on some deleted poem
27 Jul 2003, 12:15 PM
tragic
on (untitled) by http://bandgeek
6 Sep 2003, 5:07 PM
title ideas anyone, or other constructive feedback?