on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
9 Nov 2002, 5:54 AM
You know, I wasn't going to respond to your incredibly moronic comment. But then I saw the truly pathetic attempts at retaliation on *my* poems, and I wanted to clear something up. I do not care. Maybe, if you had any kind of writing talent, grammar, spelling, or intelligence at all, I might respect what you had to say. As it is, however, you came across as a complete idiot who was trying to strike back and gain back some of the tiny bit of ego you had in the first place. So thanks for the laugh, man.
on Missing You by psychedelic
27 Oct 2002, 4:30 PM
i like the emotion of this poem. the last line doesn't sound quite right to me, though. try taking another look at it.
on My cousin's baby sitter. by Bachus
27 Oct 2002, 4:23 PM
this is the stupidest thing i've ever read. really.
on Spellbound by Limness
20 Sep 2002, 4:05 PM
i love the rhythm of this piece. it's excellent.