on Pressing Matters in the White House by cleverdevice
26 Aug 2003, 5:27 PM
Shizzolate that mofo.
on blue lilac and I (edit) by richa
7 Aug 2003, 8:23 PM
Very nice richa.
E-minor is a chord, by the way, which would take multiple instruments to hear.
This is unfortunate because the poem really enjoys having a solitary instrument, but also benefits from recognizing specifically an e-minor feel.
Perhaps:
'and picking from the still air
a dorian scent of trombone'
(Dorian is a mode that has a minoresque feel to it and can be played with a series of notes on a single instrument.)
E-minor is a chord, by the way, which would take multiple instruments to hear.
This is unfortunate because the poem really enjoys having a solitary instrument, but also benefits from recognizing specifically an e-minor feel.
Perhaps:
'and picking from the still air
a dorian scent of trombone'
(Dorian is a mode that has a minoresque feel to it and can be played with a series of notes on a single instrument.)
on God is a Lady by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Aug 2003, 12:51 PM
Not much of a lady if she's playing with yours, is she? :)
on Speaking my mind. Brilliant Idea! by thepinkbunnyofdoom
7 Aug 2003, 2:10 AM
I am your patron saint. I absolve you.
Don Quixote would never apologize, too immersed in what he is to be anything but brave.
Sometimes we are what we are, expectant filter be damned. A 0 until you remove the apology. :)