on My Night on July 4th by ~incarnate~
5 Jul 2003, 1:12 AM
Yes, could have done with a rocket.
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 1:56 PM
SHIT AND ABRUPT! 1
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 2:03 PM
NICE PACE.5
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 2:13 PM
FANTASTIC, you are one fun bunny boiler,i'd hate to be in your partner's shoe's ,cause you live in crazy town. KEEPIN IT REAL 10
on He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz
5 Aug 2003, 10:43 AM
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
on Beauty, sleeping (revised) by Ranger
26 Apr 2003, 12:46 PM
BEEN DONE ON TV.DULL
on He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz
5 Aug 2003, 10:43 AM
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 1:08 AM
This has been done before, but with noughts..
Try using ya brain in a creative way!
Try using ya brain in a creative way!
on Caesar and the Giant. (revised) by SupremeDreamer
5 Jul 2003, 1:38 AM
You wouldn't say that about George Bush - you pinko Americans and in the immortal words of Alf Bexton "ruin the planet, ruin it now before someone else does". PS Read the Bible, cause however you look at it whatever you do, Jesus loves a sinner, the world loves a winner and Jesus saves all.
on some deleted poem
5 May 2003, 12:56 AM
Jason not getting any?
on some deleted poem
5 May 2003, 1:00 AM
lol..great ending...JASON.
on some deleted poem
5 May 2003, 1:11 AM
You didn't learn much.Little baby made me laugh though.3
on Whales by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Apr 2003, 1:27 PM
Wale's are shit at rugby too. I liked the end,it made a nice change.4
on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik
30 Apr 2003, 1:38 PM
Really not my cup of tea, but I appreciate your poem as it stands.4
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 1:52 PM
Hey the ending was good.
If it's about ya-self though don't bother with the death scene, no point if ya canny leave a good looking corpse.live long and ugly?4
If it's about ya-self though don't bother with the death scene, no point if ya canny leave a good looking corpse.live long and ugly?4
on Sunday night movies after bible study by Bachus
30 Apr 2003, 2:18 PM
fuckin funny HA HA HA HA HA....6
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 12:57 PM
I HATE IT WHEN THEY DON'T VOTE.I LIKED IT,SORRY YOU THOUGHT I MEANT YA POEM,NO,NO NO...THE THING IS YA KEEPIN IT REAL HOMBOY.TOPICAL AND NOT AFRAID OF CONTROVERSY.YES I MEANT HOMBOY.I KNOW BIG FAT MEANIE BOO HOO...EVEN US HIPPIE TYPES GET A BAD DAY.LAME3
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 12:42 PM
GOT DUMPED AND IT HURT?
on some deleted poem
26 Apr 2003, 12:57 PM
I HATE IT WHEN THEY DON'T VOTE.I LIKED IT,SORRY YOU THOUGHT I MEANT YA POEM,NO,NO NO...THE THING IS YA KEEPIN IT REAL HOMBOY.TOPICAL AND NOT AFRAID OF CONTROVERSY.YES I MEANT HOMBOY.I KNOW BIG FAT MEANIE BOO HOO...EVEN US HIPPIE TYPES GET A BAD DAY.LAME3
THIS TIME LAST YEAR,IT'S LIKELY YOU HADN'T HEARD OF GARETT S. BUT AFTER THIS ENGLISH STUDMUFFIN GOT HOT WITH THE WORLD IN A PHONE BOOTH,THE SCHUMACHERS TOOK NOTE
REMEMBERING STU SHEPARD.I PICKED UP THAT RINGING PAYPHONE,THE CALLER TOLD ME THAT HE'S GOT A GUN TRAINED ON MY HEAD I'LL DIE IF ,I HANG UP.
PLAYED OUT IN REAL TIME .I HUNG UP AND FOR ME LIKE THIS POEM ,YOU KNOW
REMEMBERING STU SHEPARD.I PICKED UP THAT RINGING PAYPHONE,THE CALLER TOLD ME THAT HE'S GOT A GUN TRAINED ON MY HEAD I'LL DIE IF ,I HANG UP.
PLAYED OUT IN REAL TIME .I HUNG UP AND FOR ME LIKE THIS POEM ,YOU KNOW