I see you are one of my biggest fans.....Keep watching because it only gets better love. Thanks for being brutal with some of your comments but true talent doesn't need attitude to back it up. I have been writing for years now buddy and just because my stuff isn't structured doesn't mean I don't know what I’m doing. We have choices to make and with expression that is mainly what it is about. HAVE A NICE DAY :)

I'd like to inform my readers that I am a female. Please don't judge if your own stuff is basically crap. I want a talented writer to review my stuff then I'll take comments into consideration.

Nice wording but it is like telling a story, nothing really poetic about it maybe that was your intention.
I have seen better from you so since I know what you are capable of I'll give a 4.

Stupid fucking idiots can’t appreciate individuality. Poems don’t have to be about pretty flowers and happy thoughts. Writing is a form of expression and I think your writing is awesome because I get a feel of what you’re feeling. Your words are piercing and I truly enjoy reading your work. Don’t let these fuck turds discourage you.

Note: Creative Criticism is about helping the writer get better at his/her form of writing. When you just put a writer down you do nothing to enhance their talent.

My heart bleeds black blood,
blood that I can taste,

Nice line. I like when people write and realize poetry isn’t about rhyming. Your words flow freely and when read aloud seem like no other words can fit next to each other.

Awesome.