on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2003, 5:12 PM
These dimensions do nothing for me.
on some deleted poem
10 Nov 2003, 5:39 PM
Pardon me... I like this one. Good bump in the night. thump thump
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 8:17 AM
Again the cryptic. Environmentalism? Or a hefty paycheck?
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 8:21 AM
hmmmn?
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 10:27 AM
Here is my 10 back.
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 6:00 PM
Unfeeling Wretch! This zombie was some mother's child> well, maybe not. I retch along with you. 24.4444
on some deleted poem
11 Nov 2003, 7:07 PM
Such a messy love--- with a heart floating mysteriously about. How does your body function?
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 10:01 AM
Good Show! 24,5553
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 10:04 AM
Smile, You poor critter. You'll be a long time drowning.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 7:26 PM
Just off hand, Does this not qualify as a PIMPLE?
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 7:28 PM
Sound like we are dad to me and food for the crabs. 20.0001
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 7:31 PM
OOps! did not mean the slip of dad is dead. Meant Dead Is Dead.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 7:37 PM
Madam Pandora I Presume? Or the Boogie Man's boogers?
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 7:40 PM
But it is not mine! I am going to be TWINKLES! And judging from your name (nothingtoanyone) it can't be yours.
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 11:53 PM
Sounds a bit hellish. Dying of a physical disease? Leaving as of a timed schedule---as in the relationship will only last x amount of time? Leaving as in till death do us part and it may take years? 20.88845
on some deleted poem
12 Nov 2003, 11:59 PM
Let me say second off that I do not read comments before I write my own, so warning me about tears and such after the fact that I have done so gets no sympathy. Besides, why should you ask for consideration or a light hand on a critique of a poem you post on a public site? Seems rather silly. It is a good Woe Is Me even so!
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 6:38 AM
An where might this party be? Another crpytic thingy that I do not understand.
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 9:32 AM
These nicely worded phrases lead to the Queen? I do not see how.
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 9:33 AM
Drivel. Try poetry.
on some deleted poem
13 Nov 2003, 2:55 PM
Nice little ditty. Poetry can be a cold shoulder to cry upon. 22.3334