on Peptalk in the Dugout by Dovina
15 Jan 2005, 12:08 PM
ok ummm the back and forth conversating that goes on in peoples comment areas is histarically and idiotically funny, and secondly, awesome expression of how when men are playing a sport and unable 2 fondle unexpecting women, they resort to fondling themselves ***9***
on i think by PhSbLoNdE569
21 Jul 2004, 10:49 PM
OMG i love this poem ash!! its very very good, definately ur best and heres a 10!!!!! .. which is well deserved
on youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569
21 Jul 2004, 10:46 PM
A very nice expression of the whole jared situation ash, which i do believe is the problem in this poem. Or maybe its sum1 else cuz u wrote this in march n jared was more recent.... hmmmm well ne ways, its nice .. and heres a 8
replying on youre there... by PhSbLoNdE569
21 Jul 2004, 10:45 PM
Well if 'one' really is becoming a shriveled husk of a person because you are reading the same poems over and over again, maybe 'one' should not read any more poems if your soul purpose is to criticize...just a thought
on depressed by PhSbLoNdE569
21 Jul 2004, 10:35 PM
hey! and u say MY poems are depressing??? lol its a very good expression of w.e u are feeling! and heres a 9
replying on What Do You Do? by tori
7 Nov 2003, 3:03 PM
oh thanks, thats reallllllll nice. but excuse me, lots of ppl think its good so go to hell