on Regrets, No More by writteninskin
6 Aug 2002, 10:56 PM
live* not life
on Regrets, No More by writteninskin
6 Aug 2002, 10:56 PM
Are you stupid? re-read it please. The poem does not discuss glorifying this state, but being able to overcome it and life without the need to feel loved by someone. geez man....wake the fuck up. Thats why the poem is called "REGRETS, NO MORE"....
on Regrets, No More by writteninskin
6 Aug 2002, 9:15 PM
there's nothing wrong with wanting to feel needed and loved.
on School girls lovely school girls by ==Doylum
5 Aug 2002, 6:47 PM
Thanks for your comment. It's nice to know that people who are jealous of actual talent leave low scores and mean comments. Maybe you can find some solice in those pretty school girls eh? lol. grow up, you fucking wanker. *skipping and giggling back home*
on I Hate You by mytenderrage
5 Aug 2002, 6:37 PM
Don't listen to a damn thing these assholes say. This poem is beautiful because you wrote it to express something inside of you. The best quality a poem can have is honesty, and yours is seeping with it. A poem doesn't have to have a bunch of metaphors or long complicated words to be good. A poem has to send out a message. Good work, and much love. Take care. Besides, I read Dark Angels poetry, AND THEY ALL SUCK!!!
on Reality by ThoughtfulSoul
5 Aug 2002, 10:15 AM
I like the poem. I'm not bitchy or rude like most of the people I have seen on this site. The poem could use a little work, which is why i didn't give you a higher score. I wrote poetry similar to this when I was starting out years ago, and even know, one or two of this style will slip out. Perhaps if you added some punctuation in the right places, it would help give the poem a bit more "kick", so to speak. Many poets use punctuation to signify pauses, breaks, and stops. Good job though, I enjoyed it.