on ~haiku~ by Entelechist
8 Dec 2003, 5:04 PM
So, this is haiku. It's certainly discriptive.
on some deleted poem
8 Dec 2003, 4:46 PM
Like nothing I've read, but I haven't read much poetry. I don't understand what you're trying to say, but you certainly say it in a unique way.
on Dolphins Of Dorset by Caducus
8 Dec 2003, 4:55 PM
Expressive poem. I could see the blackthorn thickets and your father removing the thorns. I really loved it.
on Grandma's lullaby by timvick473662003
8 Dec 2003, 5:01 PM
I like it.