on Birmingham gardens by INTRANSIT
10 Jan 2006, 12:32 PM
Very nice. I've been to the Birmingham Botanical Gardens many times. I had to walk down that gravel path barefoot once -- long story. And I've always wanted to fish in the Japanese Pond.
replying on Towards the Sun or The keeper of the bay they call a pond by somemorepoetry
12 Dec 2005, 10:28 PM
You know how geese fly in a V-shape? That's the idea.
replying on Towards the Sun or The keeper of the bay they call a pond by somemorepoetry
12 Dec 2005, 3:09 PM
Thank you for taking the time to really read it and for all the suggestions. You caught me with a rough draft.
replying on Low Tide by somemorepoetry
18 Jul 2005, 11:47 PM
How do you mean that? Do you mean in terms of the theme, the imagery, the structure, etc.? Because if you mean in terms of the structure and the less poetic diction than it was done purposefully...but then it again, it might have been an ineffective technique.
replying on Fingers Are Soldiers by somemorepoetry
28 Apr 2005, 9:33 AM
thanks. It's actually about writing.
on Carnival Creatures by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Apr 2005, 7:37 PM
I'm not sure if you need a question mark at the end or not, but this was good either way.
on To sow and reap by somemorepoetry
8 Mar 2004, 7:51 PM
just an attempt at actually using a rhyme scheme of some sort
replying on Homecoming by somemorepoetry
27 Feb 2004, 3:24 PM
what do you mean? any suggestions?
replying on Homecoming by somemorepoetry
26 Feb 2004, 1:41 PM
thanks
on Ivory, slaves and gold by horus8
18 Dec 2003, 7:48 PM
i have just been educated
on The Lion and the worm. by <{Baba^Yaga}>
14 Dec 2003, 7:59 PM
Nicely put...good use of the good book