on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:43 PM
Razorgrin-- I apologize for being a shithead. Please forgive. it's such a rowdy roust in here I came out swinging. i know what you mean. every man wearing a hat and reading a newspaper. I didn't know who was coming to get me first. The Man , or the Aliens.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:46 PM
Anagram- didn't mean to imply.
on Comparisons by anagram
28 Aug 2002, 5:07 PM
On second look these semm like beginnings of sentences. If your still fond of this one maybe you could finish some of these sentences and what you make of it.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 10:48 PM
Awful, gawdy and awful. Makes me think of cheap Tijuana Louis XIV furniture knock offs made of plywood, glue, and paint.
on To Dwell For Freedom by devotedwonder
28 Aug 2002, 10:49 PM
I didn't know convicts had access to the net.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 10:53 PM
I think you should stop gazing and concentrate on reading something of value.
on mine own battle: by Sapphire
28 Aug 2002, 10:58 PM
Fizz of fear? Really. Fizz of fear?
on Petrarchan Sonnet about Love by emilyowey
29 Aug 2002, 9:13 AM
This isn't bad it does have a few things holding it back. you can get rid of the Ands altogether. Then you can expand the to've into to have. I enjoy the lines --we give ourselves away...---For love and I ... Personally I've never tried coing that whole abbaabb..thing so you get points for accomplishing that. I still think it could be better. 6
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 9:19 AM
I can relate to that whole 'understanding my own confusion'. I know enough about biology and brains and hormones to explain why we have so much trouble getting on in this world. I know I've heard his name, but I don't think I've had the pleasure. I'll look him up at the library.
on some deleted poem
29 Aug 2002, 8:59 AM
Cheers! Dr. Christof,that's fantastic! I'm sure you'll be making oodles of pounds (hey, theres no symbol for English currency on my keyboard!)now. Are you going to teach? Yes I like this poem. I did get lost in the 3rd stanza, don't know what a biro is, (a pen brand)and then it's all gladly and clouds and leaving books scattered. Why do the planes like pewits make you go? So tell me, you must know alot about this fellow, what do you like best about your Lord Thomas
on Comparisons by anagram
28 Aug 2002, 6:25 PM
But it's never good in the first place. Think of it. The first time you made love. Now compare that to what you're capable of now. I go through hell with my poems. Don't think I just toss those out. Some come easy like Monica, but I still have to sit with them and work them through. It's worth it.
on Until Then by Katie
28 Aug 2002, 6:41 PM
Night, bright, shore, more, land, sand, away, away, away. Katie, plain and simple.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:34 PM
Who's been giving you a hard time, Anagram? you are sweet and dear. Most Yanks (98%?) have no idea what MJ-12 means. This is a place of higher learning. There are no stupid questions.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 5:14 PM
Rotten thing for a tot. They sense every little change in their parents' dispositions. Youu must have been horrified.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 5:17 PM
I'm off to make vittles for the childrens. See you in 2hrs.
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:26 PM
What the fuck are you talking about?
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:59 PM
Razor grin-- What did he look like?
on some deleted poem
28 Aug 2002, 4:30 PM
Many of your dear friends committed suicide. I'd hate to speculate what that says about you.
on Enslaved by Twisted Wizard
28 Aug 2002, 11:12 PM
There's a shot you can get for this, or you can take antibiotics for 10 days. the county clinic will treat you for free.