replying on Truths by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 7:56 AM
Yeah, you just keep convincing yourself of that. The average car costs $30,000 but I can still by a head of lettuce for $.69, gee I wonder how that works out. 100's of billions of dollars dedicated to instruments of war, but little angel maria can't go to school cause there's not enough room. They've shut down more then 50% of the county clinics here, and a doctors visit cost $90.00. Fuck you, I'm praying for the day the economy collapses.
on futile existence by chinstrap
23 Oct 2002, 7:47 AM
Try a McVities Chocolate Digestive. Their super!
replying on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
23 Oct 2002, 7:39 AM
I know a biscuit is a cookie, What I don't understand is why you would refer to them as something as unappetizing as a 'digestive'. It was explained to me yesterday. I just keep picturing some bloated guy munching on a choc. disc. I think it's a good idea. It's difficult to get people to eat their vegetables. They sell them at a place called Trader Joe's but I don't remember the packaging carrying the word digestive.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 2:11 PM
*<;o) I am a winking clown with a big red nose!
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 1:41 PM
Sorry, I'll get it right next time. *<;o) I'm a winking clown with a big red nose!
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 1:29 PM
Yes maria, I think your personal problem is the worst one here at poemranker so far, with the exclusion of -=Dark_Angel's=- ( does the 's come before or after your left-wing?) but at least yours has a solution.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 1:19 PM
It which case, would maria rank at the top of the best or the worst list?
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 1:06 PM
We need to talk, I'm going to e-mail you right now.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 12:59 PM
On your own the only way you can work out hte trauma is by re-creating it! It's a fact. You are in a very fragile and dangerous state of mind. You need guidance getting through it. you should be talking with girls who have been through what you've been through. You don't need your parents approval, your 14 go to a support group on your own. Start there. Just do it once, to prove I'm wrong.
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 12:56 PM
YOU CAN'T. YOU CANNOT. IT'S IMPOSSIBLE!
replying on America by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 12:48 PM
We do more then be horrible, we're bloody honest and we try to be objective. Please, please, please seek some counselling for what happened to you. Don't fuck -up an entire decade of your life like I did. I wish you the best.
on requiem for an ex-girlfriend by natalie
22 Oct 2002, 10:56 AM
Very fine, the ending is strong, I like that.
replying on Comfort Food by jessicazee
22 Oct 2002, 10:51 AM
I was just teasing. Good poem. Gnocchi is my favorite comfort food and seem to fit your them, lovely little pillows that they are. Yuo couldn't possibly list them all.
on Daniela by little_angel_maria
22 Oct 2002, 10:47 AM
"said my personal life"? What is that? ".. the fact of what..." terrible. "I treated you" to lunch, kind, what? Fix your errors. If you weren't such a brat, and could listen to critism without having a fit, maybe you would learn something. I sympathize with your situation, I was raped at 13 and then fell into many abusive relationships with older men because of it, but that's no excuse for bad grammer. Now stop whining and open your eyes to the fact that your writing, at this point, needs serious coaching. I think you just need to give yourself a few years before you start posting this stuff. Write all you want, keep it somewhere and then come back to it and make something beautiful out of it, this is tripe. I also suggest you move to an area with better schools if you can. Here in the states they have a victims relocation program, you shouldn't have to go to the same school you were going to before this happened. I'm assumng you're still in school. Does everyone in your neighborhood know this happened to you? Get some counselling, before you start acting out like I did. Poemranker is not an appropriate place for you to be discussing this shit right now.
on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar
22 Oct 2002, 10:25 AM
Waht about gay men? Are they enslaved by some other redolence?
on recent submissions by <~>
22 Oct 2002, 10:19 AM
If they would just stay seated at the children's table. Maybe nentwined can create a Kiddie's Korner for them. I can dream can't I?
replying on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2002, 10:16 AM
Ohhhh! Good idea.
replying on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2002, 10:10 AM
What's a digestive? Is it medicine?
on Stockport by Nicholas Jones
22 Oct 2002, 9:49 AM
Having never been to Stockport, I can objectively say this is a fine example of a discriptive poem. I love the way you represent Engels humanity. You are excellent at sense of place, a good influence on me. What are chocolate digestives?
on Never more by Mutant_X
21 Oct 2002, 11:51 PM
u r gr8. lettuce c- u- p. k? L b w8ing 4 u 2 3L me!