replying on Three In a Room by Sam
22 Jan 2005, 7:21 PM
LOL! The poem as far as I am comcerned isn't all about it.
replying on To A Streetchild by Sam
5 Feb 2004, 4:33 PM
and you're sweet, you guys inspire me even more. glad to be sorrounded by great poets...cheers to poetry...i still beleive in its power to charge the world...the way the ancient ones did before!
replying on To A Streetchild by Sam
5 Feb 2004, 4:31 PM
hey andrew thank you very much...that was very objective i'll put that in consideration...you're great
wow!...thanks a lot. I feel totally inspired by you and all of the wonderful comments. All the while i thought i'd be a lonely frustrated poet all my life. And somehow all of you guys realy gave life to aspiring poets like me. I hope more and more people would embrace poetry and change the world with their works...the way the ancient poet did before. Have a great poetic life!
replying on To A Streetchild by Sam
5 Feb 2004, 12:10 AM
Thanks for the comment i'll take it for consideration and there's no offense taken. The poem actually is a sad one, pure emotions something where my brain does'nt count (LOL), reason why maybe it doesn't evolved much. I just scribbled it away, when i saw that poor child.
on mythical by SupremeDreamer
3 Feb 2004, 12:11 AM
Love it when somebody else like me tries to embrace the mysteries of being!
on To Avalon by annabellee
29 Jan 2004, 6:07 PM
Great one here...reminds me of the struggle in the early days when women are trying to find their voices and be heard and be given the chance to depend not only themselve but the world as well.
on Transmissional Dance by Red Optimist
28 Jan 2004, 9:30 PM
The rhymes and the meters does'nt quite go smoothly.
on See the Sun Overhead and Believe by phbiscuit
28 Jan 2004, 9:26 PM
This is great, i can see the symbolism and the social relevance of the poem if we would dig deeper from it's content. It's true we're deaf, blind and dumb somehow living in this universe.