on Fleas by bigbigdog
19 Sep 2002, 10:56 AM
Okay, fuck face it is one thing to be an idiot and have no one know you are, but when you display what a fuck you are to the world, well that is another story. You hack, you fucking rip off aritist, you fucking thief, you fucking plagiarist. DO NOT STEAL WORK FROM POETS, especially OGDEN NASH and claim it as your own. This is RUDE and FUCKING WRONG. This poem, one of the shortest ever written, has more profundities in it than you could ever think up in a lifetime. You are an insult, a worthless fucking trite of a human being. And if you do not die soon for this action, I hope your life is miserable just the same. Nentwind, we have to get control of this shit. Delete this poem.
on In the Light by nocturnalism
19 Sep 2002, 8:55 AM
Besides being awful, I think you have a terrible misunderstanding of neurosis and that adds to the banality twofold.
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 8:51 AM
outline is complete, first stanza finished. no word from frass. but, my aim is true.
Yes, and all like clockwork. I was lost over the weekend when you did not post anything. Nentwhistle should make an exception for you and let you post as much as you want. Just so you know, in my new poem I was so inspired by your work that I too used birdies.
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 8:43 AM
Did you see my challenge to Frass? I thought it very chivalrous.
replying on Tugboats by poetandknowit
19 Sep 2002, 8:35 AM
This is almost a half unveiled compliment from you. But you are right. Two months ago, it was Tolstoy (or Horus8 Inc in our little world) now it is down to this. Still snipping.
replying on Why... by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 11:00 PM
Well there is a clever response: I meant to do that. I did. I did. I like to write crap that is just crap and not crap that is crap but actually makes fun of other crap that is 100 percent crap. Pat on the shoulder for you my boy. And if the poetry is good on this site it gets good ratings and comments; if it is bad, well, same thing in many cases, but in others, it gets what it deserves.
on Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87
18 Sep 2002, 10:50 PM
Please stop writing. Please. Pretty please. Pretty please with sugar on top. Is anyone here a HS creative writing teacher? Please, if so, tell me how do you stand going to your job every day?
on Why... by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 10:39 PM
This has to be the dumbest poem ever written or even thought of in the history of bad poem writing. This is ten times worse than a flaming pustule of a pimple poem. This is 10 times as bad as anything I have ever read in my thirty three paltry years. The horror of having to read something so unworthy has made me... ... ... run to the restroom ... ... ... why ... ... why ... ... why ... ... Did yu show this to your mother, teacher, puppy. did you get a gold star? Yes, delete, delete, del....
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 12:22 PM
Nothing. I spent the night there once. It is one of the poorest cites in the US, which is funny since it is in the wealthiest state. Springfield, MA. Now that has to be the most boring city in NE. I won't take you there at least not in my poem.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 12:07 PM
not me, with me..........but not in Hartford.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 12:05 PM
DA is loneshadow29.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 12:02 PM
This is not chitchat. This is a serious discussion regarding a serious poem.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 12:01 PM
not you, with you....
Ha! working on my love poem.
Ha! working on my love poem.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 11:59 AM
yes, you.
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 11:59 AM
I am not cranky!
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 11:53 AM
Are you walt?
replying on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
17 Sep 2002, 11:53 AM
do I act like I have an alter ego?