on Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8
13 Aug 2002, 5:20 PM
This is very good. 7. I like the poem very much. However, although I'm not prudish at all, I didn't like the crude bracketed words. They didn't offend me. Oh no. I just thought they were shit.
on Song of departure by kawakurdi
13 Aug 2002, 5:15 PM
This is poncey, verging on the ludicrous. 3. Some nice imagery in isolated places, but lines such as 'I am scared of a time when like a loony' mean that quite frankly my friend, you should be put up against a wall and shot.