poemranker ::20 most recent comments by dreamsdiefirst and replies

Comments bydreamsdiefirst, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Nature by dreamsdiefirst 18 Feb 2004, 9:57 PM
U r sure a threat to Procter & gamble!
replying on Insomnia by dreamsdiefirst 17 Feb 2004, 10:29 AM
Thanks for the help. I wil be striving to make haiku rhyme while keeping 5-7-5 form.
replying on Insomnia by dreamsdiefirst 15 Feb 2004, 11:22 PM
English is not my native language so I have been struggling with both vocabulay and syllable count. Do you suggest any resource so I can catch-up?
replying on Kusaku by dreamsdiefirst 15 Feb 2004, 11:01 PM
Thanks! Dont know the iota of Japanese. Had an idea to write this poem. Finally found words related to Haiku poems on a website and thus constructed this Haiku. Thanks for reviewing.
replying on outSourcing by dreamsdiefirst 15 Feb 2004, 10:47 PM
This was infact a pun on American corporations which want to outsource everything to other countries and leaving their own countrymen and women jobless. I didn't mean to hurt any bodys feeling with this. I am sorry if you are offended. I am not an American but the "99.9% of people" that you have mentioned, dream baout living, loving and nurturing with "fat ignorant people" - I wonder why????????