on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 8:54 PM
Mainly in Glasgow Frass but I'm told they are devine. Thanks for the support.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 8:52 PM
Glad you liked it P&K.
on The War by Tarquin De La Bog
16 Aug 2002, 7:42 PM
Like it a lot.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 9:02 PM
Perhaps didn't word that very well.I was responding to a criticism of my rhyming ability from one who seems to only write open verse. I enjoy all forms but prefer Rhyming poetry.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 7:24 PM
Best one I've seen in this form since joining the site.
on some deleted poem
16 Aug 2002, 7:32 PM
Yeah, you know what they say - dying is the best career move you can make.
on C Words by RWAndersen
16 Aug 2002, 7:47 PM
Can't concur, considered clever.Clearly capable creator.Continue contributing.
on The Messenger (The Unreplaceable And Greatly Missed Mr. Mercury) by anagram
16 Aug 2002, 8:05 PM
Sorry had to post this deeply sentimental and personal work. Thanks for going easy with first grading and comment.
So sorry to have to have inspired such ire Tarq. (hope you don't mind me calling you Tarq.).That is twice you have had a go at my rhyming ability without explaining the reason for your low opinion.Please expand,I would be grateful. I have read 1 or 2 of yours which were open verse, do you just dislike true poetry that rhymes or can you not catch on to the cadence.
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
16 Aug 2002, 9:11 PM
I enjoyed the "War" poem and voted accordingly but chose to keep 'Queens council' on this one, but as we are apparently being brutally honest - this one is SHITE and struggled to be considered a zero.