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on On a Forgotten Riot, Washington, DC, 1990 by dave78981 19 Aug 2002, 8:48 PM

that line refers to the clientele of the restaurant district where the riot took place. On second glance, without the background info, it could be a little confusing...

Thanks for the input!

on Loss by dave78981 20 Aug 2002, 4:31 AM

it's not up to me to explain the poem's meaning... find your own meaning in it... besides, haiku is supposed to evoke a scene

on Pork by AEcutee1435 20 Aug 2002, 12:20 PM

oh well done. expressive, well within the traditional 5-7-5 syllable structure of haiku, and evocative of the true nature of blah blah blah. is this a joke?